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lame.

You can use the program, but you can't make a movie. Lack a humor, plot, style, and skill hinder this 'animation' a lot. In fear that I would have missed something key to 'getting' this flash movie I look at what else you've created. However I missed nothing of value or importance. Sorry. I give you an "E" for effort, but a "3" for crap. This isn't a put down. Keep working on you skills in Flash and develop a better style through basic drawing skills. Then you'll be half way done to becoming a decent animator. Good luck.

Fa-sizzle my dizzle wit da threezzle?

I dunno, I guess I didn't dig it. Sorry. Although it is notable that you can use the Flash program, I feel it could have been used to create something more worth while. Flash movies with loud unbalanced sounds really put a bad taste in my mouth. I get the point, the movie is supposed to projected a "bad-ass" tough essence, however an obnoxiously loud rap soundtrach and over used gun shot wavs project more lack of effort than anything else. You can do better. Keep trying.

Interesting, but lacking.

Some very interest visual usage. Some great effect. However this submission although colorful and flashly lacks solid plot. There were some editing errors. Such as the ground breaking off behind the dog as it stands there and in the next scene the dog is hanging on. How did he get there? Each scene had something visual "cool" however they lacked direction between each of them. You are talented but you need a clearer direction in what you want to project. Fair job, but you can and most likely will do much better. Try developing a story about smegma (that it a word, look it up.).

Skater910 STFU!

This little craplet of Flash animation is over two years old and it is still here. Wow. Alhtough it wasn't the best thing I've seen I have seen worse. However what is worse than see a steaming load of flash [poop], are people such as Skater910 who trash talk everyone, but have created nothing of their own. These people are complete sexless losers and are only critics because they themselves can't, or have the balls to, create and submit something. So fuck off dork (Skater910), your lame.

renokruse responds:

True words from a true NG Hero!

Keep tryin'

Although I didn't enjoy the movie,I think you do have the ability to make decent work, however I feel you need to find a style first. Figure out how you draw best and stick with that. As for your sound usage, my only gripe was with the hobo's constant grunt, it got annoying quickly, maybe if it changed from the last scene to the next. Keep trying and working and you'll produce great work.

gurpritsahota responds:

thank you

Weak.

Dispite making no sense and being overly misqued, it is evadent that you have a grasp of the program and can produce animated shorts, however make sure there worth making. Good ability, but poor product. Sorry.

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