That was...well, it was something.
I can't say I laughed once during this "movie". I was more annoyed than anything else. However credit must be give in the fact that there were well thought out menus and subtitle options. It is obvious that you can use flash, but you can not write. Work on better plots and humor a lot. With out good or in this case funny storyline that movie in whole fails.
well, thanks for complementing my menus.
Needs Work.
You put in the effort and I'm not going to bad mouth you on that. But you need to clean up the character drawings a lot. This should be to hard for you however, because by the looks of it you can in fact draw. You may not be used to drawing in flash, it takes time. You get it though. As far as your skill in the program goes, you've got. Maybe a little honing, but you're obviously capable of using Flash. And as far as sound, your soundtrack, to be honest, annoyed the ever living shit out of me. But this is something that is a personal thing that only hindering your final product for me and maybe others who feel the same way. Decent work. Keep it up and do your best.
Poor retarded Cody.
It still seems your caretakers have no idea what your doing on the computer in your computer center. All this time they thought you were playing Reading Rabbit. I'm still amazed that they are teaching the retard (or mentally challenged) how to use flash. Shame on them. Oh by the way Cody, you got a lower score this time than last because something that wasn't funny the first time is even less the second time around. But I can't expect you to understand that... cause your retarded. Go watch Mr. Rodgers or something. And remember YOU EAT PUDDING WITH A SPOON, NOT A FORK. Good luck Cody. Your Pal, Big Bird.
Damn and you got the time to sit here and write long reviews for all the shitty movies and make sure there punctuated correctly
Mein Krap?
When did they start teaching the retarded flash animation? Someone tell your caretaker about this. Unfortunately for you this isn't the Special Olympics so you don’t get a gold medal for sucking as badly as you do.
Although Anit-Bush, I didn't dig it.
Ok RPG Style BREAKDOWN-
Use SEX PISTOLS attack +10
Use SHORT ANTI-BUSH MOVIE WITH LACK OF DIRECTION AND MEANING attack -50
Attack miss
Point lost
Your poisoned
...Ok maybe that was the best way to review your "movie". It seemed good enough in my head. Well here is what this "movie" needs: Direction, meaningful content, power message, and examples. The attack on Bush, or as retards call him W, is lost when even anti-Bush (The president not pussy) fans don't really get it. Think it over some more. Find a message and run with it. You have the ability, now find the meaning. Good Luck.
If at first you dont succeed...
It seems to me that this is your first flash project or at least the first you've subitted here. Not horrible, but far from good. You need work in a few areas. ONE Drawing: You need to develope a better feel for drawing within flash. TWO Flash Skill: You need to work with the Flash program some more, there were a few errors with your movie (Like the bartenders arm staying at the bar when he leaves). THREE Sound: You have sound, but at time it was hard to hear and/or understand. FOUR Stop being English: No one likes people from the U.K., try hiding your voice behind a Turkish accent. People love the Truks. So with that, I give you some sound advice. Try working on area four the most and the others will come with time. Keep working, keep making, and keep trying.
Did I miss something?
This "movie" was poorly animated, wasn't funny, had unbalanced sounds, and lacked even the basics of plot and story. Your obviously trying and thats good, but doesn't carry you nor your "movie". Better luck next time... G-dog... East Side Coast Trilla...i'm white and it shows.
-__- Zzz
Author's comments:
"I made this quickie because I was bored"
So you were bored eh? So was I.
I didn't say it was going to be interesting...i'll be the first to say it was crap,I could do alot better
SMEGMA!<- it is a word. look it up.
There were too many things lacking in this 'movie' to list, but here are a few: Style, Story, Sound, and some other S's... maybe a Snake... or a Salad. But I'm getting side tracked here. I gave you a honest one, sorry but you deserved it. Keep trying and develop your skills more. Flash is like the Force and your not a Jedi yet.
Age 41, Male
Joined on 12/12/02
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