The Tramp Who Was God Keep tryin'
Although I didn't enjoy the movie,I think you do have the ability to make decent work, however I feel you need to find a style first. Figure out how you draw best and stick with that. As for your sound usage, my only gripe was with the hobo's constant grunt, it got annoying quickly, maybe if it changed from the last scene to the next. Keep trying and working and you'll produce great work.